Here are a few comments from my review.
1. JaJeJems - https://icraftgifts.com/blog/reach-out-and-touch-someone-with-a-handmade-greeting-card-406.php
Great post! very informative with all 3 product Key Phrases incorporated into the links.
2. Fairy Cardmaker -
http://www.fairycardmaker.com/2012/10/holiday-style-boost-with-seaglass.html Very nice post! I enjoyed reading it. I feel like I am getting to know everyone better
One note - Just so you know, when you link multiple times to the same page, only first link counts. So the anchor text on the first link is the most important. I don't think it will hurt, but it will not help to link to the same page with multiple anchor texts. I'd probably try not to overdo it. Especially, don't use very generic terms like "bracelets" when you link to a page that's been optimized for "Seaglass Jewellery".
3. Delightful Suds -
https://icraftgifts.com/blog/more-than-one-colour-parachute-404.phpIt's a nice post. However, you haven't used any of Bibi's primary keywords in your article, as anchor text to link to her optimized pages.
You link to one product in your post "stitched bracelet", but that's not the page that Bibi optimized.
Her 3 optimized products pages are:
Agate bracelet,
Floating bead necklace and
chain maille bracelet.
It's ok to link to other products in your article, but the main idea behind these articles was to link to those optimized pages.
4. Jewelry by Kat -
https://icraftgifts.com/blog/there-is-magic-in-that-silver-405.phpNice post, a bit on a shorter side, could use a couple more images... But you've managed to incorporate 2 product links with good anchor text into your article, so that's good.
5. Silver Workshop -
http://www.silverworkshop.ca/beaded-charm-bracelets-cha-cha-bracelets-jewelry-by-katGood article, but also feels a bit short and missing personal photos. But that's just my personal feeling. Good anchor text and you've mentioned all of them, which is what we were aiming for.
6. Red Rock Designs -
http://redrockdesigns.tumblr.com/post/33363886546/natural-handmade-soap-for-all-skin-types2 out of 3 product links and a link to Marta's store - well done! The only thing I'd say again - this post also feels too short and for me it's missing personal photos.
One thing that I've noticed on almost all posts is
missing Alt text on images. Alt text helps replacement engines to interpret images. It also makes images accessible to visually impaired users, that use special software to browse the web. On iCraft blog, you can enter alt text in the image property box.