Ok, here is my feedback.
1. http://www.silverworkshop.ca/chain-maille-jewelry - from Silver Workshop
Great post! Good links to product pages, smart way of incorporating primary keywords and use of alt text on images.
2. https://icraftgifts.com/blog/where-to-find-sea-glass-411.php - from Delightful Suds.
Sorry Marta, but I found some disconnect between the blog title "Where to Find Sea Glass?" and the actual article story. Only first paragraph relates to the post title. Then the story changes to be more about JaJeJems and less about "Sea Glass".
Also, by adding Crocheted and Lampwork Jewelry to the mix, you will only delude the "Sea Glass" theme of your article.
Not a big deal, but there were no alt text or links on product images. I fixed those for you. Just keep these in mind for your next post.
Anyway, it's still a very nice post, so good job!
3. http://www.fairycardmaker.com/2012/10/a-charmed-life-with-jewellery-by-kat.html - from Fairy Cardmaker
If I had to rate, this one would get my highest score. Great Job, Lisa! No comments.
4. https://icraftgifts.com/blog/how-to-make-soap-at-home-409.php - from JaJeJems
Great, very informative post, JaJeJems! I really enjoyed reading it.
However, it looks like we have to replace some of the images used in the article, as Janis doesn't own them... Janis, please
email them to us and we'll replace them for you. This is a note for everyone - you should always check with the owner of images if it's ok to use them in your post or, at a minimum, give a credit to the owner at the bottom of your article to avoid any copyright issues.
I can't remember now if you had alt text there or if I've added it later. Anyway, I see it's there now, so it's good.
Great job incorporating all 3 Marta's products with links!
5. https://icraftgifts.com/blog/the-joy-of-giving-a-personal-handmade-greeting-card-410.php - from Jewelry by Kat
Very nice post, Kat! Not sure if Lisa helped you at all, but I was impressed.
Small things: I'd use "Christmas Angel Card" for optimization purposes, instead of "the xmas angel card". Great that you were able to mention all 3 Lisa's products.
I see that you've figured out how to add images and alt text. I'd also recommend adding links on images, as people almost always click on images, when browsing the page. (go to the same image properties pop-up, where you've added alt text, but then click on Link tab). I'll fix this for you on this post. This is just something to keep in mind for the future.
6. https://icraftgifts.com/blog/stand-out-with-a-silver-lining-412.php - from Red Rock Designs
All good! No comments really.
Thanks everyone! I am sure this was a lot of work.