Fairy Cardmaker
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« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2017, 05:30:44 pm » |
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Hi Julie! Welcome to iCraft. I am not an expert but I had a look at your shop anyway. In the first couple of lines, you want to have your main product words. You say: "Therefore, we provides eco-friendly confections."
"Confection" to me is something sweet to eat - like a sweet dessert or candy. I don't think that's what you meant. Try...
"Therefore, we make eco-friendly, washable, cloth creations."
I like your pictures - they are nice.
What about showing the bibs on a model or a life-sized doll? That might help people judge the size. Even when we give measurements, online shopping is a very visual experience.
I don't know how to get noticed. I haven't mastered that yet!
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