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JOYOUS CREATIONS


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« on: February 02, 2014, 10:38:50 am »

To anyone who has the time please review my shop Joyous Creations and give me feed back on what I can do better. Thank You all
Fairy Cardmaker


Posts: 1115


« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2014, 10:02:35 pm »

Welcome to iCraft!

I don't have a lot to comment on.  I think your store and pictures are pretty well laid out.  Your store description is okay too.

What I would add is:
https://icraftgifts.com/handmade/46298/lealther-unique-black-bling-belt.php
  • Use more photos.  You get 6 slots, try to use them all.
  • List the size of the belt in the description.  I know it is down in the product details, but some people will be too lazy to scroll down and see it.
  • What is the buckle made of?

https://icraftgifts.com/handmade/45499/heart-locket-necklace-set.php
  • The description is way too short.
  • Describe the colours of the beads.
  • Describe the locket - the colour, metal, and swirls in it.
  • How big is the locket?  (Your dimensions only list the length of the chain.)
  • You say absolutely nothing about the earrings and the bracelet - what are their dimensions?  What kind of earring is it (post, hook, loop)? What kind of clasp (if any) is on the bracelet?

https://icraftgifts.com/handmade/46400/antique-sliver-plated-strech-leaf-bracelet.php
  • If this is antique... is it handmade?
  • What kind of leaf shape is that?  It's not a maple leaf.... you could even be generic and say tear-drop shaped leaves.
  • You should use the word "wear", not "ware"
  • You put "whide" instead of "wide" in the materials - I think size info like that should be in the description, not in the materials tags.

Happy Editing and good luck with your shop!
Lovebird Silver Jewellery


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« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2014, 03:51:24 pm »

Hello there

I'm new to iCraft, but have been selling online for a white now.  I love your work and would only suggest working on your photos by turning up the brightness a bit and keeping the shots simple. 

Happy iCrafting!

Lovebird Silver Smiley
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