Fairy Cardmaker
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« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2014, 10:28:45 pm » |
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Bonjour Sebastien! Pourquois vous n'ecrivez pas votre produits en francais aussi?
I know there should be accents on those letters, but I am not French and I do not know how to make the keyboard do that in these forums! But, I do feel it's a valid question. You have the luxury of appealing to persons of more than one language - why not include both English and French descriptions?
While it is not perfect, there are only minor language issues with your shop description. Here is how I would change it (just one person's opinion):
First, there is a place in the shop profile to put an "announcement". If you do not have an announcement (like a sale or a new product launch or a craft fair appearance), I would put a catch phrase of some kind in there. What I think would be good for you is:
"Wooden goods from sustainable practices."
I think it's good to highlight the sustainability because there is a large market for that kind of thing. Here are some small fixes to your shop description: ------------------------------------- Woodworking, custom wooden boxes, cheese boards, wooden toys, cutting boards, kitchen tools
I have over 25 years experience in the field of woodworking and my workshop, Atelier Unik-Art, designs and manufactures various wood products with materials derived from sustainable development and environmentally friendly practices.
My products include: wooden toys, wooden boxes, corporate gifts, custom small furniture design and other decorative objects. I can also laser engrave on site for your customization.
Materials mainly used: Woods salvaged from other local industries, torrefied wood, reclaimed wood, local woods (from the ''Bas Saint-Laurent, Qc, Canada'' area): aspen, maple, cherry, easter cedar, gray pine. Others species are also available on request: Black walnut, cherry wood, oak, etc. -------------------------------------
I put the products closer to the top, before the materials. You had "corporated gifts" in there. I'm not sure what you meant. I assumed gifts for businesses? So, I changed it to corporate gifts. Please let me know if that is not what you meant.
I love the laser engraved coasters! They are rustic and elegant at the same time!
Welcome to iCraft!!
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