Store Critique Please ^_^

[Windsorianspa]

Hi Everyone,

So I've just decided to move from etsy and so far loving the website etc. I've been working really hard on my items and photographing.

Please may I have some times critique

Kind Regards,

Bridget

[Fairy Cardmaker]

Welcome to iCraft!
Off the top of my head:
Your shop looks "clean" and pleasing to the eye (good for a bath product seller!).
I would re-arrange some words in your announcement:

FROM: "Self-Indulgent bath products, Wonderful scents and fragrances in all handmade products including bath salts, bath bombs, bath soaps."

TO: "Handmade bath products, wonderful scents and fragrances in all handmade products including bath salts, bath bombs, bath soaps."

FROM: "These days, there's nothing more than I love is spending time creating wonderful loving products such as these."

TO: "These days, there's nothing I love more than I love is spending time creating wonderfully natural bath loving products such as these."

Personally, if I am looking to buy soap, I would not look for "wonderful loving" soap.  I would look for "natural soap".  Consider also using the word "spa" in your shop and products since it is in your name.  What about "home spa" or "handmade spa products".

I think you have used your collections well.
Pictures are nice enough.  People always say to keep improving, but yours are decent already.  You are not using all the image spots available so try to find ways to use them.