Hi Delightful Suds,
I reviewed your post. It's a good story. Good work!
You just need to add a few images. Ask Bibi for her photos to make story about her more personable. Also include a couple photos of her jewelry, maybe those items that you are specifically mentioning in the story?
And the most important thing -
you need to add links to Bibi's store and to those select product pages that she optimized before.
That's the whole point of this assignment - to create blog posts with links that have good anchor text to select (optimized) pages.
I see you mention "chainmaille jewelry" in your article. Just add a link to this phrase to Bibi's store.
You also need to mention a couple of her products with anchor text "Agate bracelet" or "chain maille bracelet".
I've copied Bibi's primary keywords for you below.
Here is what Bibi specified as her primary Keywords for her optimized pages:
1. Product URL:
https://icraftgifts.com/handmade/34466/chainmaille-bracelet-in-silver-european-4-in-1.phpPrimary – chain maille bracelet 1,600
Secondary - European 4 in 1 – 3,600 ; chainmaille jewelry – 5,400
** Changed the main photo to show item is a bracelet.
2. Product URL:
https://icraftgifts.com/handmade/32258/floating-bead-necklace-in-blue-and-black.phpPrimary: Floating bead necklace – 140
Secondary: Floating necklace – 4,400 ; chunky bead necklace – 1,000
3. Product URL:
https://icraftgifts.com/handmade/29165/agate-bracelet-w-blue-gemstones-and-crystals.phpPrimary: Agate bracelet – 2,400
Secondary: gem stone jewelry - 6,600 ; chunky bracelet – 5,400
Store URL:
https://icraftgifts.com/red-rock-designsPrimary: chainmaille jewelry – 5,400
Secondary: beaded keychains - 3,600; beaded lanyards – 6,600