Fairy Cardmaker
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« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2010, 02:40:45 pm » |
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It's just me, but I'd say yes. I see the Fleur-de-lis, mountains, and a snowy owl (very beautiful bird - was my mother's favourite.) It says, cold-weather shop. It does not speak to your craft at all. Note, not all places where knit hats are worn are snowy either. Australians might put hats on their children when it's 5 degrees celsius. Babies in the premie ward in hospitals might need little hats in any weather.
If you totally love the owl, I wonder if it would look cute as a cartoon owl with a knitted hat on? Or, since your market is children, consider ways to make them "family hats". A lady in my office has two girls, 3 years apart and whenver she buys something for one, she has to buy exactly the same for the other - same colours and everything or they fight about it. What about showing a big sister and little sister close-up of their heads, side-profile, nose-to-nose with hats on and BIG smiles. Or mother and son if you want both sexes represented.
Since I was looking at your shop with a critical eye, I noticed some other things that might help. There is more than one way to spell tuque. You might consider the alternate spelling as a tag: toque.
I looked at this listing: -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Item #: 22470 Availability: 1 Dominant Color: Brown Materials: acrylic Tags: hat, knit, baby, child, cute, brown, mittens, mitts, Listed on: May 18, 2010 Last updated on: Jun 21, 2010
PRODUCT DESCRIPTION: Same great pattern, in mittens! These mitts can be made specifically with any of my hat designs. They can be lined with fleece at extra cost.
Hat is not included in this listing. Please check my other listings to purchase.
Mittens are featured in Taupe with Oatmeal/Natural stripes.
Items made in a smoke-free home.
Thanks for looking! ----------------------------------------------------------------------
- If someone used a google replacement to find this listing, the first sentence is not helpful because they haven't seen any other listings. - I think you should put "acrlic yarn" as a tag, not just as materials or else put it in the description somewhere. - Is there a reason for accylic? It is hypo-allergenic? Put that in there somewhere. - I would also put boy and girl in the tags like the way you have "unisex" on some. Some people might replacement for "child" size, but some might replacement by gender. Consider also, "children" instead of "child". *MY* understanding is that replacement engines will pick up "children" in a replacement for "child" because "child" is part of the word "children". DON'T QUOTE ME ON THAT. Try it out to see, maybe. I say it only beause some people will replacement "child sizes" and some will replacement "hats for children" or something.
Just an non-knitter's ideas.
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